MY LOVE FOR YOU (Version One)
My love for you is dying,
And along with it, I go,
I care no more for thinking how
I used to love you so,
You used me and abused me,
For far too long,
So, I sigh, and say “goodbye!”
This is my swan song!
MY LOVE FOR YOU (Version Two)
My love for you is dying,
And along with it, I go,
I care no more for thinking how
I used to love you so,
You are the sweetest, forsooth,
And you’ve the greatest taste by far!
But alas, you broke my tooth!
Goodbye, nut candy bars!
Must I vote???
I love them both…
😊
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Haha! Thank you! I bet dentists would choose the second version!
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They are great, but I laughed out loud at the second one!
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Thank you so much for visiting and commenting! I love your site!
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Haha.. loved the second one!
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Thank you!!
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Love the humor!!!! Thanks for the giggle today! 😎😎😎😎
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Thank you, Valerie, and happy Thanksgiving!
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I really like both poems but will stay with the second because of its unexpected humorous ending.
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