THE FLY IN MY SOUP
I looked down at my pea soup,
And I promise, it’s no joke,
I saw a housefly swimming
A great backstroke!
If my bowl was the Olympics,
This fly would be a winner!
Instead of an unwelcome guest
Swimming in my dinner!
But as the sole judge,
I grabbed card and pen,
And scored his backstroke
A perfect ten!
The fly looked up
And gave me a wink!
Then, before you say “backstroke,”
He dove into the drink!
Before I could grab a spoon,
Or do anything more,
The fly flew straight up
And out the door!
Looking back, I wonder,
What is the greatest mystery?
It’s not why he was in my soup,
But how a fly learned the best backstroke
In Olympic history! 😊
Ha ha ha another awesome one.
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Thank you! You are so kind!
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Nicely penned, full of humor. It made me smile. Also, I like the beautiful rhyming of second and fourth verses that make the poem more musical. It is the kind of poem I would like to listen to at an open mic. And thank you again for taking your time to check out my blog and comment on the last post!
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I am honored by your kind comments! Thank you!
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You are very welcome.
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Ha ha amazing such a beautiful and fresh right up. I love the humour and your style, it’s so distinct!
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Thank you so much, Tanya! I love your distinctive style, too!
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My pleasure dear!
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So fun to read your work!!!
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I love your site!!
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That was awesome… I could actually see your words living out in my mind.
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Thank you very much! And good luck on your continued writing!!
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